LIVING IN THE PAST, Chapter 1:Krogan and The Rockeater

[krek]

I am totally new to storytelling, so bare with me:)
And please reply, negative or positive ...

Living in the past
Chapter 1, Krogon and the Rockeater

1.1:A little spark

The night is as dark as it gets, no sound...The only sound you can
hear is the paws of the Wolf gently hitting the ground.Just when
Krekzul is ready to give up and take a rest for the wolf he's riding
,He can see some light, far far away. Krekzul rubes in his eyes for a
moment, just to check if he really, finally reached a town. Krekzul looks
down on the tabard in his left hand.

Just a little more Thielias... He says as he pats the wolf.

Krekzul begins riding his wolf as fast as he can, the light comming closer and
closer. Would he find some answers there?...
Why was that tabard
among his old personall belongings?
Would he find someone in that village who knew to wich tribe the
tabard belonged too?
And most important if he found some of the tribe members,
would he find some answers?..

Chapter 1.2:Tauren-Trash
Krekzul jumps off the wolf, and lets thielias drink some water.
He looks arround him, until he see's a sign [The Crossroads]
He keeps looking until he see's another sign pointing away from
the town [Orgrimmar].
Finally we are getting closer, I'll be there at the next sunrise, first
i should give Thielias some rest

Lokmar Tusdini Krekzul says
The wolf lays his head on the ground, and seems to try and relax.
Krekzul walks inside the Tavern.There he see's a tauren, looking a
bit clumpsy with a broom in his head.

Might you have a room for me? Krekzul says a bit arrogant
Of--offcourse Sir orc, orc sir. Says the tauren, falling over his
tongue
Oh, and might you know this tabard? Krekzul highers up his left
hand.
Y-y-es, Collours of the Orcs of the red b-b...b-b..blade , orc sir,

Where could i find them?..you know?

I'm afraid not sir orc,orc sir Says the tauren while letting
his broom olmost falling to the ground, But then Krekzul grabbed it just
before it landed on the ground, and smahsed it against the table,
making it brake.
The tauren just stands there, shocked.

Sorry...here take this Krekzul says with anger.He throws a little
bag wich seems full with coins.
Krekzul turns arround and walks out into the night again.


Chapter 1.3: Moving a Rock...Eater
Krekzul looks very agitated.He raises his left hand while walking out
And yells MIGHT ANYONE KNOW, WICH TRIBE THIS TABARD
PRESENTS?

WHO IS WAVING ARROUND WITH THE COLLOURS OF OUR  TRIBE?
A yell comes from the distance, just in front of a watch tower.

Krekzul looks where the yell is cong from and see's a very
muscled Orc and the mmiorc that yelled was in full armor.Krekzul does
Not hesitate for a moment, and started walking towards the two
Orcs.
Krekzul tries to calm down, and sound relaxed as he speaks to the two
orcs, one of them sniffing.
I did not mean any disrespectKrekzul say's calm.

Wut uz yuz brusins,ish a trube, whu ure yuz wulkin rund wuh sh
culuzThe strong muscled orc says, not making any sense to
Krekzul

Krekzul pauses for a moment, then shrugs and now looks in the
direction of the armored Orc. But just when he does, the orc grins a bit and just vanishes, Krekvul feels paranoid and takes some steps back.
Then he hears a sound comming from his back, he turns arround
And there the orc is, with a different set of clothing, just laughing.

He askes what youre bussenis with our tribe is, and why you
were walking arround with our tabard... dead one. The orc said calm, but with
a strong voice.

I...i just, This tabard was o-

Krekzul suddenly feels corned as he see's the stronger muscled orc corning him.

You feel cornerd huh..? The orc grins

Wutz, u chicku The other orc laughs.

Give him space Rock-Eater, we had our fun...now explain
yourself Orc!

Krekzul Looks down, and then up again.
This tabard, was...one of the few things that ...
That was recoverd of my personal belongings from the past...i.
I hope to find some answers by seeking out the tribe that matched

Krogan scraches his chin.
Hmm.Intresting story...very intresting, an old member of the tribe ha!Am i right
Rock-eater?The orc says.

Hmmpf, tuz lukzs luce a wuklin tu mu, Krogan The muscled orc Says.

Krogan vanishes and re-appears on the spot where Krekzul first saw him.
Let's find out, shall we? Krogan says while laughing.

Krekzul thinks: Am i an ex-member?...what is this, do they know more?
Find out what?...Krekzul say's

If you're...capable of joining our tribe orc ! Now move Rockeater
The muscled orc makes a stance, stomping his feet deep into the ground.

What..?...what is, what i have to push him?

Juz nut dur?...cum sun chicki the orc in stance brabbles.

Krekzul shrugs as he does not know what the orc is saying.
Krekzul takes a few steps closer, moves his arms to the shoulders
of the orc and grabs them.He then pushes with a little effort, not
moving the orc an inch.Krekzul sighs and puts some effort in it,Now
his feet are slowly lowering in the ground.
Rockeater just laughs, and then he suddenly grabs Krekzul's arm,
and smashes him onto the ground, in his back.

Rockeater Laughs.
Krekzul Slowly stands up and runs towards Rockeater with his arms
streched, ready to push him over.
Rockeater is surpised, but then swiftly tries to grab Krekzul's streched
arms and then pushes hum further, Krekzul's arms are grabbed, and
he Falls against a Warcatapult.

Krekzul looks angerd.THAT IS IT! Krekzul yells.
He gets up, throws some of his armor pieces off, Throws his plate
gloves over to Rockeater, and krekzul rushes after the gloves.

Rockeater gets hit on the head by the gloves. Krekzul jumps up high
In an attempt to bash Rockeater, Rockeater headbutts Krekzul away.

Krogan stands there, laughing
I like this one...

Krekzul slowly stands up, takes a few steps back ready to try again.

Krogan gasps and then say's
Enough, rap it up.

Krekzul rushes over to Rockeater in an attempt to surprise him,
Rockeater lifts Krekzul up and puts him over his shoulder.

Let me go ! Krekzul say's in anger.

Krogan claps.
Let him go Rockeater...Pretty impressive Dead one, I like you
You have a storm inside of you. Krogan laughs a bit.

Oh and dont worry, noone ever managed to move him... Krogan
says.

Be here tomorrow, just when the night falls, so the Chieftain can
take a look at you, You are hereby accapted in the tribe..And if
the chieftain agrees...you may wear the tabard, and you'll get
some answers Krogan vanishes after that right away.

Bu--...WHat the..where did he g- Krekzul Turns arround,Nobody
there...

I will be here tomorrow...

Krekzul makes a campfire and sits there, losing himself in the
core of the fire, thinking about what answers he will get.
Tomorrow is a new day!..a new start...

And there will be a day that i will move the rock...there will be

[krek]

SO, really happend IN-game , what do my fellow orcs think?

[Burgorg]

Nice read!

[Kozgugore]

Seems like interesting stuff, yar!

[Claws]

Like the humour of the story.
Well done.

[krek]

Thank you for reading and replieing to my story.!
I will write more, as it seems it is welcomed here'