Application - Khórn The Bloodthristy

[Khorn]

Details of your Orc character:
Name: Khórn
Class: Death Knight
Level: 90


Tell us something about your (role)playing experience: Ive been roleplaying for the better part of 5 years now throught various Roleplaying guilds and gotten quite alot of good experiances and bad (to be expected) Ive been part of The Three Hammers, Disciples of Light, Second Gurubashi Empire, College of the Revenants and...cant remember anymore...i have alot of high level toons.


And finally, please write a short story and/or IC introduction about your character:

Another grunt from the horde who fell in battle only to be reawakened as a death knight, but his loyalty to the horde keeps him from losing his way and and feeling a great dishonor in the ressurection of brought on by the scourge he now dose what he can in the interest of the horde and to try and gain a final honorable death on the battlefield. So far he has been unsuccessful at his task but now wishes to lend his aid to the Orcs of the Red Blade as he feels they might share his view and love of the Horde.

(So yeah i read the replies on my previous story i understand what you mean, and so i have recreated him from scratch bother character vise and story like i have turned his age down a smidge and i think i might use the names of my previous backstory for parents and such back on Draenor, its not much at the moment but as i was doing naxx this morning i started thinking why not go with a dishonored orc who is no different from any other orc in the ranks of the horde he can still be fierce and special in his own way but as im building him now im hopeing to build a more widely acceptable character who is not (OP) but rather what you would excpect from a player based character i hope you find it worthy and i thank you for your feedback so far)

p.s Sorry for the odd placements of . and , but dyslectic and never quite got a hang of it xD

[Thrash'Nak]

Thats quite the background.. I'd be very much careful on making your own clans, as a -clan- is quite the term, containing quite the few orcs around 500 at least. I'd like to see a reason why his looking to join the red blades, unless you have something planned to introduce him. Otherwise, its fine.. abit.. as you said to me. over the egde. Keep that in mind!

I want you to take a last look at it and then we'll decied from there!

Blood and honour:
Grogona Marshfang

[Lars]

I have a feeling Games Workshop would acuse us of copyright infringement ...

[Khorn]

To be honest their cool names and i (might be wrong) dont think they have copyrighted em that hard xD

[Rargnasha]

Hello there! Seems like you've put quite a bit of effort into your application, which is great!
However, you may want to edit out some of the Khorne references.
While taking inspiration from other places can be great, then rip offs are frowned upon - We'd like to keep a healthy distance between the two!

As for the whole clan buisness, before you begin to RP an unstoppable badass, know that in the Orcs of the Red Blade, we embrace that this is a RP-PvP server, as of such, your in character strength should also be represented somewhat by your strength in PvP, something to keep in mind if you want this characters concept to work!

That said, the effort that you've put into the story certainly is admirable - So I hope you'll set around making the changes!

Best regards
Your local Chieftain.