My new machinima Story of Thurug

[Thazzrill]

Hey guys, take a look at my machinima. Tell me what you think it is one of my first so don`t be to harsh, i hope you enjoy!

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=Lhf4I6tJfi4

[Kozgugore]

Not bad for a first try. It's admirable you want to try and involve yourself in this kind of a big business.

As notes of feedback, I'd suggest keeping a bit of a faster pace to it. For a simple story (that could be a bit more interesting next time ), it progresses pretty slowly, and I saw some minor choppiness here and there, like the transition from one animation to another. Good luck on developing your skills though! Like I said, not bad for a first try.

[Thazzrill]

Thanks Koz,i think it is better then other first machinima as i seen. About chopiness and small video, i hate that youtube it shrinked my video. I will improve my movies after a few good tries.