Application - Kyvos Skullsmasher

[Kyvos]

Name: Kyvos Skullmasher
Class: Shaman
Level: 25 (for now)


Tell us something about your (role)playing experience: Some roleplaying experience with Second Gurubashi Empire (in BC expansion days). Some roleplaying in Lotro also, as a dwarf.


And finally, please write a short story and/or IC introduction about your character:
Kyvos background - "I don't remember my parents... I was borned in the Northern Barens, south of the Crossroads in a hut. I was only 4 years old when some human raid the area and got me as prisoner. They take me to the Theramore Isle and made me work in the near mines since then. 10 years in those mines, mining stones, fighting with beasts and insects... 10 years full of nightmares. Even my name is not my real name. It's a name that humans gave me. It means a cube, because of my body type...

But I got saved! I was in a mine near the Direhorn Post, mining as always. The sound of a horn wake me a strange feeling and I tried to go out of the mine. A soldier saw me and he hit me by his sword in my leg to fall down. Oh, how it hurt! But I heard another sword hitting his flesh. An orcish sword!

A raid from Orgrimmar was there, planning to attack the nearby human towers. They came in the mine to hide until the nightfall. They saved me and send me back to Orgrimmar. There I met Braux Skullsmasher, an old man who saw something special on me. That are his words, not mine. He took me as his son and he start to teach me the way of the shamans. But that last for only a year. He passed away...

I've learned some of the shamanism, but not much. I'm trying to control the elements, but it's hard..."

[Therak]

Hello there!
While most of the application looks fine, the timeframe is not quite right. By the way you've written it you were born in the Barrens, at the age of five you were captured and held for fifteen years and then finally spent a year learning about shamanism. That'd make him 21 years old. However the first orcs came to Kalimdor 15 years ago. Before I'm willing to accept it I'd like you to have a look at fixing that
Maybe he was born elsewhere but spent some of his youth in the barrens? And/or was kept prisoner a shorter time? It's up to you!
Looking forward to having a look again once this is fixed!

[Kyvos]

updated/fixed. Thanks