Orcs of the Red Blade

Name:Rognal
Class:Rouge
Level:1 But in Lvling

I am Beginner RPer

Rognal Birth in Southern Barrens. He Lost His parents While he is Child.O Group of Thief's Find him In Forest,Nearby Death.They teach him how to be Thief. Someday They go and Rognal Left alone in They Cave.He Wait for Rest but they don't back.At Last One of them Back but He Tell Rognal He must Escape And Fall Down,Stop Breathing. Rognal Hurry Escape,He Get Map,And Try to Find Great Orc City Orgrimar.After Weeks of Journey He Finally Enter Great City.And he Do what He Can Best,Steal.But He Want To Start New Life And He Don't be Thief Anymore.

I am sorry to say but I will have to decline this application for several reasons. One being that well its not very well written out. We understand that English is not everyones first language and we don't discriminate because of this.

Have you tried looking at the layout of other applications?

There is also the fact that your orc would be about..fourteen to fifthteen year old. Going by the timeline.

There is also why would Rognal join the tribe? Whats his reasons. Why did he go to Orgrimmar during a rebellion and a siege (at this current time of this application Orgrimmar is being attacked by Rebellion horde and Alliance.)

I will have to ask you to look over these points and try again. Please and thank you.



Varog'gor Vashnarz Talonslayer.