Orcs of the Red Blade

General => Applications => Topic started by: Alehearth on August 11, 2013, 07:23:12 PM

Title: Application alehearth
Post by: Alehearth on August 11, 2013, 07:23:12 PM
Hello,
Name: Alehearth
Title: Re: Application alehearth
Post by: Revax on August 11, 2013, 07:27:53 PM
Hello there! Your application is a tad short, I am well aware that might have been a mistake, but this is the template we wish applicants to follow!

When making your post please supply us with the following information;

Details of your Orc character:
Name:
Class:
Level:


Tell us something about your (role)playing experience:


And finally, please write a short story and/or IC introduction about your character:
Some tips for this; Who is your character, what does he/she want, what has he/she done, and why he/she is seeking out the red blades, etc.

Thank you!

-Rrosh-tul Hellbrew
Title: Re: Application alehearth
Post by: Alehearth on August 11, 2013, 07:33:58 PM
Sorry double clicked!

Hello,
Name: Alehearth
Level:90

I used to do rp back in the old days, so i wanna get  started again.

Story:
When alehearth was young, he had a good life he lived with his family deep in the barrens, he never stayed long on the same place cause his father was hunted down, years has passed and age has come that alehearth needed to have his own life, so he did go to the big city of orgrimmar there he met the warchief Thrall, he served the army of Thrall with his body and his soul. But everything changed when Garrosh showd up. He hunted everybody down to slay the great Bosses of the world. My father was forced to kill ragnaros with only a small hand of soldiers, he failed my got killed and my mother was a slave, i was forced to run away, And from that day i knew That Garrosh Hellscream will die Gol'Kosh!


As you guys can see i just tried something myself this is not the lore but i wanna learn everything about it in the guild. I hope you gusy respond.
Title: Re: Application alehearth
Post by: Trakmar on August 11, 2013, 09:41:57 PM
Hello there! Your grasp on the lore seem to be a bit lack. If your Orc was born in the Barrens he'd be no older than maybe 10 years, or so.

I would suggest you read this thread -> http://orcsoftheredblade.com/forum/index.php?topic=2438.0
Title: Re: Application alehearth
Post by: Revax on August 11, 2013, 11:19:25 PM
Hello again! Trakmar is right, if Alehearth was born in the barrens, hed be little more than 10 years old.

Also, it is not quite acceptable using lore-characters in your stories. I very much doubt that his father and a small bunch of soldiers killed Ragnaros, the elemental lord of fire.

Read up on the lore a bit, and youre welcome to change your application to better suit it :D

-Revax