Orcs of the Red Blade

Discussion => Game Related => Topic started by: Thazzrill on April 28, 2011, 07:23:11 PM

Title: My new machinima Story of Thurug
Post by: Thazzrill on April 28, 2011, 07:23:11 PM
Hey guys, take a look at my machinima. Tell me what you think it is one of my first so don`t be to harsh, i hope you enjoy!

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=Lhf4I6tJfi4
Title: Re: My new machinima Story of Thurug
Post by: Kozgugore on April 28, 2011, 09:52:56 PM
Not bad for a first try. It's admirable you want to try and involve yourself in this kind of a big business.

As notes of feedback, I'd suggest keeping a bit of a faster pace to it. For a simple story (that could be a bit more interesting next time ;)), it progresses pretty slowly, and I saw some minor choppiness here and there, like the transition from one animation to another. Good luck on developing your skills though! Like I said, not bad for a first try.
Title: Re: My new machinima Story of Thurug
Post by: Thazzrill on April 28, 2011, 11:39:03 PM
Thanks Koz,i think it is better then other first machinima as i seen. About chopiness and small video, i hate that youtube it shrinked my video. I will improve my movies after a few good tries.