Taken from Drevan’s Journal
The Inquisition
Dearest Drevan, do you sense that?
"The Exodus, yes, what has happened?"
I’m not sure; where peace once existed, turmoil now rots.
"I thought we had closed the chapter, need we start another? Really, there doesn’t appear to be any more to this that meets the eye..."
Oh come now, has this time alone blinded you that much?
"What are you trying to say?"
Only what you are afraid to... It seems your oath is yet to be fulfilled.
"Blah! Just words, I’ve done my part in this life, have I not earned a break."
And what exactly is that ‘part’?
"I’m done, I owe nothing."
And what of the heretics?
"Mhakzul? Moggrash? They’re both through. Small minds with big dreams."
You know they’ll be replaced...
"Then let them, they’re are not my problem."
Are you so afraid to admit that you miss it all?
"I miss a lot of things but-"
Then it’s settled!
Chapter 1
Drevan stood up, closed his journal and began to gather his belongings...
And while I'm at it, a repost of an original story I did back in late 06. Excuse the spelling errors, but I have no way to alter them.
Chapter 1 (http://orcsoftheredblade.com/dump/chapter_1.jpg)
Chapter 2 (http://orcsoftheredblade.com/dump/chapter_2.jpg)
Chapter 3 (http://orcsoftheredblade.com/dump/chapter_3.jpg)
Those chapters are one hell of a mindbender called a story. :)
good as always, keep em flowing man!
Quote from: Gohomi on July 18, 2008, 09:53:10 AM
Those chapters are one hell of a mindbender called a story. :)
They were loosely based on a set of events we held way back, so yeah, it's mighty confusing to thosse that didn't have the pleasure to attend them.
"Small minds with big dreams."
I thank you very much, infidel. >:( :D :P
Remember them times well Az.
Nice to see a repost of the story.
Quote from: Drevan on July 18, 2008, 04:27:23 PM
Quote from: Gohomi on July 18, 2008, 09:53:10 AM
Those chapters are one hell of a mindbender called a story. :)
They were loosely based on a set of events we held way back, so yeah, it's mighty confusing to thosse that didn't have the pleasure to attend them.
Well, I can't discern the exact details, but I didn't mean it as in "I don't understand what you're writing". More as in - you're not 100% sure how the story will evolve - something that I really like.
That was beautiful. Wows.
Wonderful story and great design!
Good thing you reposted them, for the benefit of the fair number of new orcs around here and probably not only ;)
Me wants more!